Posted by: Rob | May 23, 2008

The Pluperfect Virus

I don’t know how I missed getting this one. I had done a search on the company intranet for “Why is Internet access so slow?” (I know, I know…a futile attempt. Just working out some frustration.) For some reason, the page containing this piece was returned about fourth or fifth on the intranet googling of the above phrase. It was posted on the IT Pages under the Fighting Viruses “Hoaxes” category. I read it over and just loved the subtle sarcasm inherent in this brilliant piece of writing. A quick google search garnered a hit on about.com which in turn revealed not only the original author, but also the story behind this bit.

The Pluperfect Virus
By Cybersatirist Bob Hirschfeld of bobsfridge.com
(This column originally appeared in The Washington Post’s Outlook section )

A new computer virus is spreading throughout the Internet, and it is far more insidious than last week’s Chernobyl menace. Named Strunkenwhite after the authors of a classic guide to good writing, it returns e-mail messages that have grammatical or spelling errors. It is deadly accurate in its detection abilities, unlike the dubious spell checkers that come with word processing programs.

The virus is causing something akin to panic throughout corporate America, which has become used to the typos, misspellings, missing words and mangled syntax so acceptable in cyberspace. The CEO of LoseItAll.com, an Internet startup, said the virus has rendered him helpless. “Each time I tried to send one particular e-mail this morning, I got back this error message: ‘Your dependent clause preceding your independent clause must be set off by commas, but one must not precede the conjunction.’ I threw my laptop across the room.”

A top executive at a telecommunications and long-distance company, 10-10-10-10-10-10-123, said: “This morning, the same damned e-mail kept coming back to me with a pesky notation claiming I needed to use a pronoun’s possessive case before a gerund. With the number of e-mails I crank out each day, who has time for proper grammar? Whoever created this virus should have their programming fingers broken.”

A broker at Begg, Barow and Steel said he couldn’t return to the “bad, old” days when he had to send paper memos in proper English. He speculated that the hacker who created Strunkenwhite was a “disgruntled English major who couldn’t make it on a trading floor. When you’re buying and selling on margin, I don’t think it’s anybody’s business if I write that ‘i meetinged through the morning, then cinched the deal on the cel phone while bareling down the xway.’ “

If Strunkenwhite makes e-mailing impossible, it could mean the end to a communication revolution once hailed as a significant timesaver. A study of 1,254 office workers in Leonia, N.J., found that e-mail increased employees’ productivity by 1.8 hours a day because they took less time to formulate their thoughts. (The same study also found that they lost 2.2 hours of productivity because they were e-mailing so many jokes to their spouses, parents and stockbrokers.)

Strunkenwhite is particularly difficult to detect because it doesn’t come as an e-mail attachment (which requires the recipient to open it before it becomes active). Instead, it is disguised within the text of an e-mail entitled “Congratulations on your pay raise.” The message asks the recipient to “click here to find out about how your raise effects your pension.” The use of “effects” rather than the grammatically correct “affects” appears to be an inside joke from Strunkenwhite’s mischievous creator.

The virus also has left government e-mail systems in disarray. Officials at the Office of Management and Budget can no longer transmit electronic versions of federal regulations because their highly technical language seems to run afoul of Strunkenwhite’s dictum that “vigorous writing is concise.” The White House speechwriting office reported that it had received the same message, along with a caution to avoid phrases such as “the truth is. . .” and “in fact. . . .”

Home computer users also are reporting snafus, although an e-mailer who used the word “snafu” said she had come to regret it.

The virus can have an even more devastating impact if it infects an entire network. A cable news operation was forced to shut down its computer system for several hours when it discovered that Strunkenwhite had somehow infiltrated its TelePrompTer software, delaying newscasts and leaving news anchors nearly tongue-tied as they wrestled with proper sentence structure.

There is concern among law enforcement officials that Strunkenwhite is a harbinger of the increasingly sophisticated methods hackers are using to exploit the vulnerability of business’s reliance on computers. “This is one of the most complex and invasive examples of computer code we have ever encountered. We just can’t imagine what kind of devious mind would want to tamper with e-mails to create this burden on communications,” said an FBI agent who insisted on speaking via the telephone out of concern that trying to e-mail his comments could leave him tied up for hours.

Meanwhile, bookstores and online booksellers reported a surge in orders for Strunk & White’s “The Elements of Style.”

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Responses

  1. Rofl, Rob I have to remember not to drink anything before I read your blog!!

    Going to clean up now…

  2. great post (wish it were true 🙂

  3. I’m with Nurse Myra. I will never be able to text-message because the nuns whipped proper grammar into me.

  4. Pammy: sorry for the mess. Should I post a disclaimer at the top of each potentially LOL post?

    nursemyra: indeed, wish it were true. Wish even more that there something that could stop the spread of spam though.

    silverstar: I never had to deal with nuns…hope the lessons were not too painful?


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